Project 4: Draft & Critique

Andrew’s feedback on (i think) V3?

Shawnee

My printed copies (before feedback was given, and I had changed a bunch of stuff around)

IMG_4324

 

Things that need to be amended to work with Andrew’s feedback on prior V:

  • Different logo to be used and scale down
  • Scale down the decade & fix the hyphen/en sitch
  • Bring lower LH pic forward in front of transparent box
  • Pull quote line breaks
  • Not the portrait of Goudy – need to find another photo
  • Columns for Offset printing words

V9 (incomplete wording on all 3 but with majority of the suggested changes made)

Option 3 V3.9


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